Thursday, January 28, 2010

Phoenix

I lie awake
in the midnight
looking at the flames
the Phoenix is burning ....

It started with the greatest passion
to fly high
above all the hurdles
to reach beyond sky
and win over the cold sun ....

but it burnt
audacity of passion
burnt by the atrocities of coldness

I lie awake
ashes are falling
but the zeal is there
Phoenix will rise again ....
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6 comments:

  1. KarthikhaJanuary 28, 2010 at 2:57 PM

    good one:) i guess u r the Phoenix.. with so much of passion in all circumstances! keep it up :)

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  2. Akshay VermaJanuary 28, 2010 at 2:59 PM

    Thanks :) ..... I really wish I could be one ..

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  3. pramm88January 28, 2010 at 3:36 PM

    u r a poet and v dint even know it..

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  4. UnknownJanuary 28, 2010 at 4:26 PM

    hmm .. nice one

    -Abhay

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  5. SarikaJanuary 28, 2010 at 8:20 PM

    nice one bro, I didnt know the artist in you is awaken at midnight.

    Phoenix- the truth of life!!!

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  6. akshanshJanuary 29, 2010 at 12:14 AM

    nice ending...i too hope it rises..

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